Monday, November 2, 2015

peer reflection #1


1. Cianna Chairez wrote this story.
2. Their story is about how police officers are hurting kids when they don't need to.
3.Cianna's opinion is that these police officers are hurting kids when its not needed and it's wrong and they shouldn't be doing this.
4. Yes they did address the other side by saying if she put herself in the police shoes the majority of the students misbehaving are black at Spring Valley.
5. No she was not wishy washy she stated directly what she thought.
6. No there were no quotes.
7. They wrote in first point of view.http://officiallycianna.blogspot.com/2015/10/commentary-essay.html?showComment=1446492650642

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