Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Peer Review #2

1. Katie Ash wrote this story
2. Her story is about cellphone addiction putting the world in danger
3. Katie's opinion of this is that people need to put there phone down more often because it is causing danger to the world in many different ways.
4. No, she didn't address the other side of the story.
5.No, she was not wishy-washy at all.
6. Yes, she put quotes in her story.
7. 3rd person
8. Yes, you can tell she wrote a editorial
http://katieasjournalismblog.blogspot.com/2015/11/editorial-cellphone-addiction.html#comment-form

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